... found this gem.
|persuasive writing piece|
Ms. Moy you can say to the directors to destroy the school please. If you say yes because to destroy the school you will have vacation a for ever and you can go to the beach, go to see a movie, go to see your family, visit contries and more. And you will be relaxed, and you will not scoling {scolding} us and eny one would not bothering you. Please you can do it. And I will gave you 2,000,000 quetzales {local currency, approx 8 quetzales:$1}.
during the revising and editing stages, i remember asking this young writer, "do i scold you a lot?" he pressed his lips together and looked away :)
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